Every content change, line by line
All six designs use one master copy, so they compare fairly. Two rules you set on 29 October are hard: your letter runs word for word from the live site, nothing cut, nothing edited (it keeps "strange bed" in both places, since you asked for no edits); and The Other Land prices are shown. Beyond those, the audience shift called for a light voice pass. Here is every line that changed, so you can veto any of them.
| Where | Before | Now |
|---|---|---|
| Hero line | Places worth the flight, hotels worth the night, and one person on WhatsApp who knows your whole trip. | |
| Hero secondary link | Upcoming departures | |
| Hero promotion card | Next departure · The Other Land · Sri Lanka · Saturday 14 to Sunday 22 November · Colombo, Ceylon Tea Trails, Yala, Galle · ₹1,25,000 per person · Ask for a seat | |
| Two ways, intro | …or have a whole trip designed around you. | |
| Trips made for you, card | The table that is booked out for months, the room with the better view, a kitchen that already knows what you don't eat. | |
| The Other Land, intro | No coach, no flag, no Indian restaurant on night three. Prices are on the page, per person, and include every hotel on the route. | |
| Season prices | Sri Lanka ₹1,25,000 · Morocco ₹2,00,000 · December, February, March: Price coming soon · April to July: Routes being drawn now | |
| The letter | The full letter from the live site, nine paragraphs, signature and P.S., word for word | |
| In their words, featured | Arjun M., Bangalore: "No temples, no museums, just food." The Iyer family and Rhea K. move into the four below. | |
| The First Draft, example | Four of us in March, two weeks, Japan but not the obvious Japan. We care about food and design more than temples. | |
| Footer small print | The Other Land prices are per person and include every hotel on the route. |
Unchanged: the headline "We design the trip for the incurably curious.", the two products, the three sample routes and their prices, the hotel notes (still placeholders), How we work, all five testimonials, the contact details and the footer columns. The word "adventure" now appears only inside your letter.

















